寫得一般般
[quote:ea79c071ac="wsq3935566"]小心你的how are you doing 把人嚇跑了??！ :P[/quote:ea79c071ac] 看了大家的回復(fù)。很感動(dòng)。但有一點(diǎn)不明白。為什么 HOW ARE YOU DOING 會(huì)把人下跑，這不是與陌生人增進(jìn)了感情了嗎？ 請(qǐng)大家指點(diǎn)
終于知道了團(tuán)結(jié)就是力量，說的有多么正確。
說不出來的感覺，但是不是很好的感覺，呵呵，恕我直言！
我的開發(fā)信同11樓的！
寫信最基本的東西都忘了，格式，署名之類的基本樓主還要好好加強(qiáng)。。。
感覺有點(diǎn)簡單
加上你們公司的產(chǎn)品，你知道他是做什么的，也要讓客戶更好的了解你們啊。
正在學(xué)習(xí)。。。。。。
下面是別人寫的，我貼上來大家參考下咯~ KCT Co., Ltd. Jeonju High-Tech Venture Complex, #750-1, Palbokdong 2-Ga, Deukjin-Gu, Jeonju-Si, Chullabuk-Do, TEL : 82-63-212-6056 FAX : 82-63-212-6059 REPLY September 10, 2006 To : . Subject : Supplier of Hard wood Charcoal Polymer based Kitchenware Dear Sir / Madam, It is glad to write to you with keen hope to open a business relation ship with you. Your company name and email address have been introduced by e-Marketplace. KCT Co., Ltd. is one of the best professional company to develop and manufacture functional and new materials. KCT Co., Led. is manufacturing hardwood charcoal polymer that can be applied to our daily goods with its antimicrobial effect, deodorization and infrared ray (Examples: Hardwood charcoal polymer receptacle, chopping board, food waste collecting container and bedclothes). In addition, we have developed and are currently manufacturing the antistatic laminated sheet which can be used semi-permanently; replacing a disposable papers sheet used for loading goods on the pallet. In order to diversify our existing market, we are interested in supplying our high quality products to you on favorable terms and conditions. Upon receipt of your inquiries. For more information, we would like to let you know our company web site as below. If you are interested in our products, please contact us at any time. Hope to hear good news from you. We thank you very much for your attention and look forward to your reply soon. Sincerely Yours, Oh, Kyu Bong
好像太簡單了
現(xiàn)在對(duì)開發(fā)信 都沒感覺了 不知道怎么了 ？ 加油 還是寫的很棒的
感覺太簡單了，對(duì)人家的吸引力不夠大
為什么說HOW ARE YOU DOING會(huì)把客人嚇跑？不明白？
應(yīng)該改一下吧。
小心你的how are you doing 把人嚇跑了??！ :P
不錯(cuò)學(xué)習(xí)了
上來HOW ARE YOU DOING ?最好改一下，還有最好讓客戶瀏覽一下你們公司的網(wǎng)站 :D
your mail is similar to mine。 :D
