一、Courtesy 禮貌
????語言要有禮且謙虛,及時(shí)地回信也是禮貌的表現(xiàn)。
????例如:
????We have received with many thanks your letter of 20 May, and we take the pleasure of sending you our latest catalog. We wish to draw your attention to a special offer which we have made in it.
????You will be particularly interested in a special offer on page 5 of the latest catalog enclosed, which you requested in your letter of 20 May.
????二、Consideration 體諒
????寫信時(shí)要處處從對(duì)方的角度去考慮有什么需求,而不是從自身出發(fā),語氣上更尊重對(duì)方。
????例如:
????“You earn 2 percent discount when you pay cash. We will send you the brochure next month. ”就比 “We allow 2 percent discount for cash payment. We won't be able to send you the brochure this month.” 要好。
????三、Completeness 完整
????一封商業(yè)信函應(yīng)概況了各項(xiàng)必需的事項(xiàng),如邀請(qǐng)信應(yīng)說明時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)等,確忌寄出含糊不清的信件。
????四、Clarity 清楚
????意思表達(dá)明確,要注意:
????(一)避免用詞錯(cuò)誤:
????例如:As to the steamers sailing from Hong Kong to San Francisco, we have bimonthly direct services.
此處bimonthly有歧義:可以是twice a month 或者once two month.故讀信者就迷惑了,可以改寫為:
????1.We have two direct sailings every month from Hong Kong to San Francisco.
????2.We have semimonthly direct sailing from Hong Kong to San Francisco.
????3.We have a direct sailing from Hong Kong to San Francisco.
????(二)注意詞語所放的位置:
????例如:
????1. We shall be able to supply 10 cases of the item only.
????2. We shall be able to supply 10 cases only of the item.
????前者則有兩種商品以上的含義。
????(三)注意句子的結(jié)構(gòu):
????例如:
????1.We sent you 5 samples yesterday of the goods which you requested in your letter of May 20 by air.
????2.We sent you, by air, 5 samples of the goods which you requested in your letter of May 20.
????五、Conciseness 簡潔
????(一)避免廢話連篇:
????例如:
????1.We wish to acknowledge receipt of your letter...可改為:We appreciate your letter...
????2.Enclosed herewith please find two copies of...可改為: We enclose two copies of...
????(二)避免不必要的重復(fù):
????(三)短句、單詞的運(yùn)用:
????Enclosed herewith----->enclosed
????at this time----->now
????due to the fact that----->because
????a draft in the amount of $1000----->a draft for $1000
????六、Concreteness 具體
????七、Correctness 正確